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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I want to speak to your heart, and tell it how mine feels. I want to speak to your eyes, and tell them what mine see. I want to whisper in your ear, the silence of my tongue. I want to kiss your mouth, and indulge in the passion. I want to lay beside you, and spend eternity being next to only you. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The italized words make for hard reading!  |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
I think I am in love......(wink) very good very good indeed, I loved it, so passionate!! Oooo baby!!!!!! |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Richard33....Thank you so much for responding. I appreciate it a whole lot. I am kinda new at the whole poetry writing thing, and I really value every ones opinions. Thanks again. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful my friend, if only you could tell him... Great job! ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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