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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-09-28 10:36 PM

Never Tomorrow

And what do you mean to me

when there is the dark antiquity

of yesterday ~~

this is not a train of thoughts

but studied questions

~~~~~~~~reaching~~~~~~~~

for unattainable answers from

the passages of time

since yesterday.

It was a long time ago,

that yesterday.

Always with one name.

You will always have one name.

For me.

Like yesterday.

Simple,

basic,

right,

unchanging.

And gone.

Circa Feb. 1970
©KRJ
28 September, 1999

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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-28 10:57 PM

Wow, this is a great poem..........
It has extremely stonrg meaning with just a handful of words....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-09-29 09:26 AM

Thank you Sys. As you can see, this was written some years back. For my young age then, I am not objective enough to find that my writing was what I would now call juvenile, as I had expected it to sound. Do I have blinders on?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-09-29 10:52 AM

Sunshine,
You wrote well then and you write better now
*L*

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-09-29 10:54 AM

Thank you Sy! You have pleased both my 18 and 47 year old heart!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-09-29 11:17 AM

Wow, Sunshine.
This quaint little piece cuts right to the core. Powerful work, I loved it.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2003-01-04 04:49 AM

*smiling*

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