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Forever eternity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forevers eternity The windless winds of yesteryear Blow soundless to my phantoms ear. The snow, the rain, the mornings sun, The pain, the tears, the times of fun. They touch me like a second wife. They move me in a second life. They fill me full of hopes and fear, As much today as yesteryear. The windless wind and soundless sounds, The silent laughters ghostly rounds, Embrace me in a shawl of space. A spaceless space and timeless place. A place where tolls a timeless bell Of places that I used to dwell. Of candy sweet and bitter lies, Forever and it never dies. A coexisting life of me, A taste of my eternity. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: That sounds so very sad..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Seymour, so sad a poem my friend. Wish I had the answers too.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Memories can be sweet and painful, but they are ours forever. I enjoyed this very much Seymour. ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Thank you *L* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one is very well thought out and written, Sy. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Loooove this! The windless winds of yesteryear. Wow. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW !! Seymour,loved it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You three above come off like the three musketeers. I do enjoy your comments they bring me near to tears. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Seymour. Memories is what will make us immortal. We must in our life, ty to make good ones. Personally I want to be known eternally as a wonderful person...lol. Great work. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sweet work, Seymour, this rang like a splendid melody to my ears. ------------------ Michael Anderson May Darkness find you all through the day. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sad but lovely... Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marilyn, I'm sure you will get your wish thank you for the lovely comment. Michael, I love to ring bells, thank you for the gracious comments. Suthern, I can always count on you for a kind word my humble thanks. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Again Seymore...wonderfully written, although I've come to expect no less from you. ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, You are a sweet heart, thank you for the read and comment. |
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