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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-09-04 12:15 PM


Always I have grieved for my mother,
for her I have never known.
Her place was taken by no other,
her dying left me alone.

She's been with me each day of my life,
caring for me from above.
I have been a child, mother, and wife,
guided by my mother's love.

Never there to hug or to hold me,
missing her makes my heart ache.
The living of her life helped mold me,
through womanhood and heart break.

Losing her made me a survivor,
it made my brother one too.
She was taken by a drunk driver,
on a day we'll always rue.

My courage I learned from her as well,
for she left her land of birth.
Thoughts of her courage make my heart swell,
validating my self-worth.

She taught me much without being there,
how happiness fills the heart.
Happiness though is certainly rare,
embrace it right from the start.

We never talked about my first kiss,
nor even of my first date.
We never discussed marital bliss,
nor of my future or fate.

It became my turn for pregnancy,
to be a mother as well.
She was not there to talk to you see,
that was it's own kind of hell.

I cry every year on Mother's day,
when my child gives me a card.
I left unsaid things I want to say,
the remembering is hard.

©1999 DreamEvil



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WhtDove
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1 posted 1999-09-04 12:19 PM


What a beautiful tribute! This was beautifully done!
Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-09-04 12:20 PM


DremEvil, I loved this. Sad, but still a beautiful poem. Tara, I'm so sorry...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Poet deVine
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3 posted 1999-09-04 12:22 PM


A wonderful poem for anyone who's lost someone precious. A definite 3 Kleenex read!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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4 posted 1999-09-04 12:23 PM


Oh my, that was beautiful!! It is difficult to imagine my mother not being there!! Am teary eyed!!

Thank You for sharing with us!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
5 posted 1999-09-04 12:23 PM


DreamEvil, thank you so very much for writing that for me. You did a wonderful job at capturing my feelings and wistful longings.
caroline
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6 posted 1999-09-04 12:31 PM


outstanding work Dream...

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Mike Pickering
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since 1999-09-03
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Redlands, CA, USA
7 posted 1999-09-04 12:41 PM


I feel for you. It was a wonderful poem.
I'm truely sorry for you.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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8 posted 1999-09-04 10:51 AM


This tribute is for the mother of a woman well-deserving of honor and respect. Thank you for replying to it and to her.
miriam
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since 1999-08-26
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9 posted 1999-09-07 01:28 PM


I think your mother is here. She's in you! The way you raise your child is a resemble of her work through you. My prayers go out to you.
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