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My feelings for you
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My feelings for you |
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Zaleha Junior Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 10singapore |
I feel so lonely when you left When will you come back? Because the moment you left I started to feel sad What have happen? What have gone wrong? Everything use to be so right And our love use to be so strong The moment you step out of my life I feel so blue I always cry myself to sleep Whenever I think of you I understand everything that you have gone through And I want nothing from you It is neither care nor love But those times we have shared I just want to say thank you If you ever find a new one I am very happy for you But do remember this "That I will always stand by you" ------{---@ |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
This is a very nice poem...tip of advice (that's what we're all here for) Your poetry inclines more on love in the early years. Why not try the teen poetry forum as well. If not, well...i still like your poetry. |
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Zaleha Junior Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 10singapore |
Thank you miriam. I appreciate it. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
enjoyed your thoughts  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I see this too |
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