Cold Rain-opinions,please?

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Cold Rain-opinions,please?

Mark4Him@juno.com
Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

0 posted 1999-09-27 11:57 PM

I am alone before the cold slick window
open in the rain.
I smell the wet roads
and hear the poke-tapping of
the shower through the screen.
Not a peaceful sound but
a desolate depressing noise
that dampens not only the grass but my spirits.
A faint gray light sheens on my face
through the dim square of the window
in the cloudy darkness of the day.
All is cold and isolated
as my heart,
as the day,
is buzzing dully.

-----What?! A two-in-one?!-----

-liquid sorrow-
(a haiku)

shine liquid sorrow
drop from thick tangled eyelash
in painful release

love to all,Melissa!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-28 12:01 PM

Melissa, absolutely wonderful!

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Denise

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

2 posted 1999-09-28 12:22 PM

I absolutely love the haiku!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/

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