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The waterfall |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Waterfall Deep within a canyon sprawl, Playing games, leap, splash and fall, Living waters' dancing bright, Shunting sun and sculpting light. A picture of art to the eyes, That makes for many heavy sighs. With music to the listening ear, Exploding, charming splashing cheer. I love the lively bubbling dance, Each movement one of purest chance And when a sprinkle touches me, I feel a sense of ecstasy. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful job, Seymour. I love waterfalls, especially the one you described in this poem! I may never see it and it may not even be real, but it exists in this piece. Bravo! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh darn! I wish I wrote this one!  ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful...I love the water, and I saw it in this piece wonderfully. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
wonderful imagery Seymour! I like ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all of the above, You are the sunshine that sparkles on my water fall. thank you all. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Imagery ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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passioner New Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 3 |
good description, i'm a new member, may you comment on my work? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Hoot and passioner I certainly will comment on your work. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
another beautifully painted picture with words that you are so brilliant at achieving..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Once again my thanks for your kind words |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Great post Sy, If I close my eyes I'll feel the water splashing down on my head ...thanks |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I've seen this, and you've brought it forth again. Well done. And, thanks for making "me" part of your replies to the well-deserved compliments! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Geez, had a hard time finding the end of the replies here. LOL...This was beautiful! I am an outdoor lover, and I love the beauty of a waterfall! You have described it very well! Beautiful scene you have painted here! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Traveler, Sunshine and WhtDove. I thank all you three With all of me. |
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