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RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-09-27 10:27 PM


About Flying

I know now
how birds can fly
on feathered wings
sings joyous song
fair acrobatic dancing
prancing through the air
what thoughts of gravity?
brevity certainly not!
I do know
though I can't fly.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-28 08:47 AM


very nice
RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-09-28 07:58 PM


thank you very much....can you tell me what style it is? I have no idea. The first two lines came to me and when I wrote them down I noticed how they ryhmed crossways...so I did it all the way through.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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