Open Poetry #2 |
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night-daydream |
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[email protected] Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
a star showered sky each tiny sun blazing distantly winking,signalling clear and white in the inky black night sky grass below wet with tears of diamond dew out of the darkness trees whisper faintly leaves shivering like hope I shiver too, possessed by the need for someone, someone I have not yet known -----by the way,my name's Melissa.Please call me that,I know the username's confusing! [This message has been edited by [email protected] (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Glorious Mark. The hope shines through this one like the loneliness through the other. Brilliant. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Melissa....beautiful, I can relate |
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