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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
The night you held me led me to believe you were mine. The night you kissed me sent shivers down my spine. The time we spent together gave me hope. But the time you left me I couldn't cope. When the only word you spoke was a straight lie. I tried my best to not let you see me cry. And when you said "I Love You" I walked out the door. Simply because I couln't handle your lies any more. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel |
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[email protected] Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
Good poem,sorrowful and wistful.I love your signature.Jewel is my favorite artist.Have you read her poetry? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written. A relationship just can't exist in an atmosphere of lies, can it? ------------------ Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Thank you. Yes, I have read Jewel's poetry. I have her book "a night without armor" She s a very big inspiration. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lynn...love with lies is no love at all...I'm glad you figured that lesson out on your own Hugs  Ruth |
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Soleil Member
since 1999-06-12
Posts 113 |
Nice. It's always good to put those like that behind you. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Sad poem.. but with the right conclusion! |
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