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Open Poetry #2

A Hope Shines Brightly

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Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

0 posted 1999-09-27 07:21 PM

No piece of you do I possess
no proof for all my trust.
Not even a picture in my mind's eye are you,
the happiness sure to come.
All that is mine is hope
that shines silvery within.

You are a star in my future,
a hope so distant,
a dream resting on a cloud,
a promise yet unfulfilled.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-27 07:37 PM

Lovely little poem!

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Denise

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-09-27 07:42 PM

Love the last line...a promise yet unfulfilled! I've had plenty of those!

Paul Allen Lupien
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 114
Ferndale,Mi.USA

3 posted 1999-09-27 08:17 PM

Wistfully poetic concept-well expressed.

PAL

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-27 08:34 PM

Short and sweet....I like it

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-09-27 10:26 PM

In agreement with Hoot there! This was sweet!

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