Mystic Moon (challenge from DarkAngel)

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 1999-09-27 01:19 AM

Lovers' kiss is framed by the mystic moon.
By her light they drown in each other's eyes.
Intimate embraces cause hearts to swoon.
Passion is captured by the echoes of sighs.

By her light they drown in each other's eyes.
Around them rises night's enchanting song.
Passion is captured by the echoes of sighs.
Two hearts that beat as one cannot go wrong.

Around them rises night's enchanting song.
Warming desire holds back the chill air.
Two hearts that beat as one cannot go wrong.
Fingers tangle within each other's hair.

Warming desire holds back the chill air.
Whispered tenderness adds to the romance.
Fingers tangle within each other's hair.
Memory recalls each past lover's dance.

Whispered tenderness adds to the romance.
Each can taste the other upon their lips.
Memory recalls each past lover's dance.
With hunger and care to her his head dips.

Each can taste the other upon their lips.
Intimate embraces cause hearts to swoon.
With hunger and care to her his head dips.
Lovers' kiss is framed by the mystic moon.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-27-1999).]

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

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1 posted 1999-09-27 02:40 AM

A well done pantoum, Dream. I am missing my Miss Mystic, even as we speak.

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Michael Anderson

Loneliness isn't in being alone;
Loneliness is alone in being.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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2 posted 1999-09-27 03:20 AM

Oh Wow, Soul-Brother, this is excellent, so beautifully written.I love it, Well Done !

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

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3 posted 1999-09-27 08:32 AM

Beautifully written as always.Well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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4 posted 1999-09-27 08:35 AM

Beautifully romantic my friend

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-09-27 09:19 AM

DreamEvil,
You swing a wide loop. A beautiful Pantoum.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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6 posted 1999-09-27 03:14 PM

Thank you.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

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7 posted 1999-09-27 06:29 PM

Wonderful! Bravo! Roses and such thrown at feet....

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

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8 posted 1999-09-27 06:46 PM

gorgeous....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Balladeer

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9 posted 1999-09-27 09:11 PM

Work created by a true craftsman of his art.

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10 posted 1999-09-27 09:18 PM

Beautiful form,clever,sensuous.I like it.

Soleil
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since 1999-06-12

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11 posted 1999-09-27 09:31 PM

Ah, and one of my favorite images. A mystic moon.

Christopher

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Purgatorial Incarceration

12 posted 1999-09-27 09:36 PM

Ditto the above, including your thank you bro!
I have to try this style one of these days...

Alwye

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13 posted 1999-09-27 10:10 PM

Definitely try it, Christopher. I love it.

Dream, phenomenal, as always. You know how much I enjoy this style, and you do it like no other. Great work, my friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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14 posted 1999-09-27 10:16 PM

This is exquisite Dream! Very well done, but all your work is like that!

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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15 posted 1999-09-29 01:45 AM

Thank you all much for the response to this piece.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Mystic Essence
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since 1999-09-29

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16 posted 1999-09-29 10:28 PM

Wow..I am left breathless. Truly stunning work, DreamEvil.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~

caroline
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17 posted 1999-09-29 10:31 PM

You have truly perfected this form, my friend. This is beauty itself.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

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18 posted 1999-09-30 03:30 AM

What's left for me to say?
Truly beautiful is what!!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)

Kelly
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since 1999-07-03

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19 posted 1999-09-30 03:51 AM

Another great one!

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