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chest pains
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chest pains |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Oh heartache most cruel of carcinogens with tumorous tentacles strangles mind and thoughts as hope becomes resolution and resolution yields to grief- Oh heartbeat only for sustenance of an organism depleted of emotion. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very good work....enjoyed the read Robert ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
good poem, strong metaphor that remained consistent throughout...:-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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