Open Poetry #2 |
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Unborn Burden |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
I'm going to have a baby a baby that's all my own I will help to shape it's life and raise it 'til I'm grown I'm going to be a mommy to some little girl or boy In only 9 month's time i'll deliver a bundle of joy I'll get to feed and clothe it, give it all my love and care and if it should ever need me I'll always be right there Lot's of teens are having babies, it's not like I'm the first but I've got this funny feeling that my situation is the worst 'Cause God I HATE this baby Even before it's born I already look upon it with bitter hate and scorn I really don't want this baby, this child I haven't had for I was a victom of rape and it's father is also MY dad |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
I do not know what to say, I pray this is not true, but somehow it sounds as though it is. This is just to sad, I am speechless, sorry. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I also hope this isn't written from true experience. Please e-mail me, I'd like to talk and not for public view ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
This is not based on personal experience at all... no need to worry. Just a poem about a bit of bitter truth that exists out there SOMEWHERE, though thankfully it's not me. |
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Ayla Member
since 1999-08-31
Posts 50 |
Emmy..though this is a sad truth,I'm glad it's not based on your personal experience. : ) ------------------ The heart is happiest when it beats for others.. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
The last few lines drained the blood from my face. And it is a tragedy that it describes someone's life, somewhere. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You really captured the horror of a very possible situation out there!! Very Scary!! Well written!! Look forward to reading more from you!! **I am also very happy to hear this isn't based on personal experience** Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-29-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Emmy, as like the rest I sure am relieved to know this is not based on personal experience.....a very moving piece on such a tragic reality.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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