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Open Poetry #2

Killed it again!!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-09-26 07:18 PM

I'm dying!
My soul is being torn in two again,
I'm my own worst enemy,
Will I ever see the end?

The end of this yearning,
The end of killing that which is so dear,
I kill the love, hack it up and destroy it,
The picture is perfectly clear.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-09-26 08:35 PM

Isis, what it is you think you're hacking apart? Why don't you give me an email and let me know what's up. ok?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-26 08:45 PM

Wow...so few words, but so much said in this piece Isis

Artur Hawkwing
Member

since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

3 posted 1999-09-26 09:09 PM

What's this actually about, mewonders? Is this about you being the one destroying your happiness? I think this is well-expressed in so few words....

Liking this one, as I like your other poems.

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 09-26-1999).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-09-26 09:23 PM

Don't die Isis! Seriously, this is great - very bold.

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