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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Happiness something that makes us smile Sadness a state that lets us think Fear this makes us numb for a while Hurt a thing that makes us drink Passion something that makes us feel Romance a way that we express Trust the test that makes us real Withdrawal this leads to lonliness Uncertainty this is what lets us learn Worry something that makes it worse Betrayal a thing that makes us burn Nervous this is how we feel at first Need this will teach what comes next Want tests with what we do not need Togetherness always brings out the best Bettering a book we need to read Love (see all the above) ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
I like this! it's cooly profound and the ending was great.Love does do all that. Affirmatively, PAL ------------------ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Neato! Like what you did here, very clever and well prepared! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is very clever, enjoyed it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
so true...so true |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Much thanks to you all for your input  I tried something new here, thought it was sort of different so I decided to see what sort of replies I got. I love coming up with new ideas, and all your comments are greatly appreciated. Once again, Much thanks to each of you |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
So many questions, and where do we go? Maybe someday I will learn. |
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