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Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-09-25 10:38 PM


The baby is gone,
a big boy sits in his place.
Where did the time go?

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-09-25 10:49 PM


so true...very nice Tara

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-09-25 11:36 PM


The boy is gone
a man sits in his place
where did the time go?


I stole it from you, I admit it...I liked this one very much..so true..so true!

I went back and looked at your web site as I had never seen it before..it's really good Tara! Loved the sound of the sea with the seagulls!




[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-25-1999).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-26 08:55 AM


Nicely done Tara....time flies by oh so quickly

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 1999-09-26 09:30 AM


Ms. DeVine, I dread the day "man" replaces "big boy".

Pepper and Hoot, thank you for your comments.

Wish I could take more credit for my website, but all I did was write the poetry, my friend, Shawn, designed the pages. He did a great job!

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


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