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Open Poetry #2

For my baby i miss you

loverbaby
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 15
Sioux City Iowa

0 posted 1999-09-25 02:15 AM

i saw the most beautiful sun set today
the sky was like a shrine
i wanted to bottle it up so i could save it
and bring it to you
because you were not there i watched the sun set alone

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

1 posted 1999-09-25 06:06 AM

I have written many like this..about something I saw or heard I was longing to share...very poignant poem...well done :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-25 10:06 AM

I have experienced this

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

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