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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-09-24 06:29 AM


Ladies are like fine diamonds,
each with a different cut and brilliance all her own.
With avid care my imagination will reach to
compare them to that glittering stone.

When you enter a jewelry store, look about,
see the wonders to be found.
Sparkling desire and radiant fire spin out
in a web that holds you spellbound.

Color, clarity, cut, so many things to decide
before you make your choice.
With so many pretty pleasures, I must confide
they speak to me with one voice.

Only one diamond will ever catch your eye,
on that you may depend.
Hold your lover tightly, tell her nightly why,
your love she does transcend.

©1999DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-24-1999).]

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-24 06:32 AM


Very old effort, reposted in it's original for contrast.
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-09-24 06:41 AM


I like this Soul-bro, as beautiful as they are,they have no comparison to the one we love.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-09-24 06:23 PM


DE...this sparkles beautifully....enjoyed this much

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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