Open Poetry #2 |
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Piddlin' at Gigglin' |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's easy making laughter, I do it all day long, To me it is, so worthwhile, To make somebody smile. Sadly life won't always flow, Like the melody of song, Admire the ones that can still smile, When everything goes wrong. Trouble tests your heart, And it comes more through-out the years, The smiles that are worth, More than anything on earth, Are the smiles that shine through tears. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe, this was very touching! See you can write a serious piece!! This brought a tear to my eye, it has touched me deeply today! So true! Well said. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Buzz, that's very strong ! ... you shouldn't be afraid of writing serious stuff ! ... ya know, you should just write more ... fullstop .... cus your poems are truly a gift .. ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: Beautiful poem, dear friend... I would appreciate laughter to brighten my day from any source... but I think that last verse describes well why your smiles are so treasured. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
EXACTLY! From one giggler to another, I know just what you mean! ![]() |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
sigh...yep, guess that's why the ones that make me smile are so precious to me ![]() thanks toe, for the smiles, and the poem, it is wonderful ![]() |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
As the laughter makes you shake and the tears just up and go look around and you will find That lovely man called TOE.. ![]() HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As I read through so many of the poems this morning, I was overwhelmed by sadness... so many hearts breaking, so many souls aching... some griefs that seem unbearable... and my sympathy and compassion go to all. I was reminded of this poem... in the deepest darkness, a smile often brings a tiny bit of healing... even if that healing isn't immediately apparent. And I, for one, am grateful for the smile-givers. Thanks, Toe... for a wonderful poem. We each have the ability to make life a little less grim for someone... I needed that reminder. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gosh! A serious Toe? This is a very good poem with a worthwhile message for everyone! Thank you. ![]() |
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