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Blue Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 14Florida |
close myself in my little box secluded inside with my pain you close your eyes to what I feel craved isolation I obtain sometimes what I think I want just hurts me ten times worse when I wanted you to leave I strengthened my own curse now here without you I feel strong but empty is what I am the tears no longer freely flow your absence my stable dam |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I understand all too well!! Nice work!! Hope to read more of your poetry!! Welcome!!  By the way nice name!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done...welcome to passions!! ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Blue Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 14Florida |
It is not my first poem here, mine are just few and far between. Thanks for the replys! |
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