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Blue
Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 14
Florida

0 posted 1999-09-23 12:06 PM


close myself in my little box
secluded inside with my pain
you close your eyes to what I feel
craved isolation I obtain
sometimes what I think I want
just hurts me ten times worse
when I wanted you to leave
I strengthened my own curse
now here without you I feel strong
but empty is what I am
the tears no longer freely flow
your absence my stable dam

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Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-09-23 12:18 PM


Oh I understand all too well!! Nice work!!
Hope to read more of your poetry!!

Welcome!!

By the way nice name!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-23 12:22 PM


Nicely done...welcome to passions!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Blue
Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 14
Florida
3 posted 1999-09-23 06:36 AM


It is not my first poem here, mine are just few and far between. Thanks for the replys!
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