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Tamboril New Member
since 1999-09-21
Posts 6Oxford, Ohio USA |
Another View Come. Walk with me for a while You will be amazed at what you see Place your feet inside my shoes Am I not, the one you wanted to be Take a glance, through these eyes of mine Can you feel what it is you see Are you sure you still want to be me Feel the pleasure. Feel the pain Only I can set you free Feel the hate. Feel the sorrow Only I can set you free This is my anger, this is my suffering Do you like what it is you see? Are you sure, it is me that you want to be? Come. Walk with me for a while You will be amazed at what you see Things aren't as they appear to be Except when they are viewed by me. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Whoa! That was great, I can almost directly relate. Everyone says how great of a runner i am and how they all wish they could be like me, they dont understand the stress and pressure i have to stand up to. its crazy, i have to be rock solid otherwise everything comes tumbling down...its so hard. great writing ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I liked this, it is something I often say, each of us is different, and a walk in someone elses shoes, would open an eye and a mind for sure [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-22-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written...we all see life in a different way ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! This is the first poem of yours I've read and I must say I'm impressed! I liked this one a lot - poetry with a moral to the story! I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Tamboril.....I like this alot also...well done.......God bless anyone that see's life as I see it! 8^) |
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