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Tamboril
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 6
Oxford, Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-09-22 10:05 AM


Fluffy Little Clouds

As I look into the sky
I see nothing but the light
Paralyzed by the sight
Of fluffy little clouds
Staring back at me

What is this incantation
That has been cast upon my soul
Or have I lost control
Of these fluffy little clouds
Hovering over thee

Carefully, I watch them stray
Into the sunset they have passed
Reaching their goal at last
Are these fluffy little clouds
Floating out to sea

My friends, where did you go?
With a quickness, you have fled
There is danger up ahead
For my fluffy little clouds
I will leave them be

The darkness, it surrounds me
Feeling lost, I'm getting cold
This blackness once was gold
Filled with fluffy little clouds
With a desire to be free

What is this? Is it sunlight?
Through the dawns mist set a glow
Ahh my friends, you're not my foe
I missed you fluffy little clouds
Smiling so brilliantly

Tired am I, so I must sleep
Fulfilling a dreamers dream
Though it's not as it may seem
Staring into your blue eyes
Staring back at me.

© Copyright 1999 Tamboril - All Rights Reserved
The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

1 posted 1999-09-22 10:08 AM


This was a very intriguing piece of writing, really makes you think. great job!!!

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 1999-09-22 01:49 PM


Enjoyed the read. Unique and good story.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



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