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Open Poetry #2

Wish i lived there

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-21 02:03 PM

dont you know
the worlds in her eyes
its not too late
better realize
dont turn your back on her again
pride you love
dont lose her my friend
i never had the chance
im left wishing
while i watch you stop
watch you stall
speak your heart
forget the crowd
shield your mind
love her divine
do it for me if nothing else
i want to see you happy
like the world
spinning in her eyes..
so clear..
wish i lived there..

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roxane
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 505
us

1 posted 1999-09-21 03:11 PM

i hope that i am not bothering you with all the replies, but i have come to look for your name. your poetry is so comfortable to me. it is so well-written, the words just flow into my mind and they all make sense at once. the images are so vivid and yet so bleak. i'm anxious to read more.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 1999-09-21 04:10 PM

Jackal, a heart-wrenching tale of unrequited love!
Sniff!
Well done!

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