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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-21 02:03 PM


dont you know
the worlds in her eyes
its not too late
better realize
dont turn your back on her again
pride you love
dont lose her my friend
i never had the chance
im left wishing
while i watch you stop
watch you stall
speak your heart
forget the crowd
shield your mind
love her divine
do it for me if nothing else
i want to see you happy
like the world
spinning in her eyes..
so clear..
wish i lived there..




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roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-09-21 03:11 PM


i hope that i am not bothering you with all the replies, but i have come to look for your name. your poetry is so comfortable to me. it is so well-written, the words just flow into my mind and they all make sense at once. the images are so vivid and yet so bleak. i'm anxious to read more.

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-09-21 04:10 PM


Jackal, a heart-wrenching tale of unrequited love!
Sniff!
Well done!

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