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Open Poetry #2

More than just a friend

Ayla
Member

since 1999-08-31

Posts 50

0 posted 1999-09-21 06:52 AM

Nobody would understand
how much he means to me.
He's more than just a friend,
Someone I've fallen in love with.
His smile melts my heart,
making me weak in the knees.
He's different from the others,
Something's special about him.
Everything seems perfect,
It's like we're meant to be.
But there's one problem,
My love for him he could not see.
I just hope that someday
he'd will understand.
I want him to be
my lover and my friend.

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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..

DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

1 posted 1999-09-21 09:43 AM

Very nice poem Ayla.We have all been there at one time or another.
Good job!!

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-21 09:48 AM

Very nice...kida getting partial to these love poems here

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-09-21 10:04 AM

Ayla,
Have to agree with Hoot, enjoyed the read.

Ayla
Member

since 1999-08-31

Posts 50

4 posted 1999-09-22 04:25 AM

Thanks for all of your kind comments..

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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..

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