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Unbound (repost at Lucie's request)
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Unbound (repost at Lucie's request) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea. The heat of their bodies dispelling the chill. Between them an eagerness stands, filled with fear. Turning to him, probing his eyes, she finds love. Revealed by her own eyes, he sees a yearning. Together, as one, the decision is made. As their lips touch, their love springs to it's full bloom. On a rock, rising above the Sea they lie. They consummate their love here, for all to see. The fire met, he lays his head upon her breast. With his hand upon her silken thighs, she cries. As tender as a dove, he wipes her tears aside. In answer to his touch, she faces the Sea. As one they stand, both feeling their fulfillment. Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea. The night beckons, calling them to it's embrace. Stepping from the rock, their lips touch, their last kiss. As they kiss, the Sea takes them in it's embrace. (c)1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Wow...this is beautiful...simply beautiful...to say any more would just ruin it's beauty. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh Dream!! I love this.. Thank you so much for reposting it.. I am sorry that I missed it the first time. It reminds me of a situation in my own life that was special to me.. I will print it and save it always.. again... thank you! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
It was beautiful...but if their encounter was so perfect, why leap to their death? I am baffled..... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very beautiful indeed DE, but I am also curiuos about the ending....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Then he has indeed shown his true gift pepper, for the sign of a true writer, is to leave the reader longing to hear more. As I do! Well done friend! Nicely placed with form matching mood! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...beautiful!!! I look forward to this day myself. I hope it happens soon for you and one voice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, Once again you make me think and drift back. Excellent. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I do believe I missed this too, hmmn. Very nice indeed! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you all, though I wonder at my ability to craft blank and free verse. |
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