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Open Poetry #2

Lost in time..

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-09-20 07:45 PM

Lost in time,
Lost in space,
Lost in meaning.

The fragile heart,
Carries many pains,
Many feelings.

The soul it too,
Carries memories,
A pain that is bleeding.

Lost in the town,
Lost in the world,
Lost in feeling.

Fighting back now,
Gaining strength now,
An end to misery's feeding.

Fear of the unknown,
A serious overtone,
Fear of never feeling...

Rejoicing in love,
Rejoicing in life,
Rejoicing in the new meanings..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-20 09:55 PM

To think that this poem was almost lost in the pile! This definetly deserves another go round. Great job.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-20 10:25 PM

For one my friend, I think this is very well done!!! A lot of meaning is packed in here. Here you show the pain, and feelings, then you go into gaining strength and fighting back. I wouldn't change a thing! You did a great job!!! Really!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-09-20 11:20 PM

Thanks to Beowolf and WhtDove, I tried something different for once, glad it was ok and understood!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

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