Open Poetry #2 |
~~no Doubts~~ |
LOST IN LOVE New Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 3COLUMBIA PA USA |
FROM THE FIRST DAY I SAW YOU I ALREADY KNEW THAT LITTLE BOY SMILE WOULD SOON BE SAYING:"I LOVE YOU" YOU HAVE CAPUTURED MY HEART AND NOW IM YOURS I LOVE YOU SWEETHEART HAVE NO DOUBTS THRU THE GOOD TIMES AND THE BAD,SMILES AND TEARS I'LL ALWAYS STAY BY YOUR SIDE AS LONG AS YOU PROMISE TO RID ALL MY FEARS I KNOW THAT TIME IS MOVIN SLOWLY DAY BY DAY HAVE NO DOUBTS MY LOVE IS ALL I CAN SAY THE DAY IS ALMOST HERE,AND I CAN HADRLY WAIT NO MORE TEARS,FAREWELL TO ALL THE CRYS SO LONG TO HEARTACHES AND GOOD-BYES HAPPY DAYS ARE HERE TO STAY NOW YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I WAS TALKIN ABOUT I ALWAYS HAVE TOLD YOU THAT "I LOVED YOU"AND TO HAVE NO DOUBTS! ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful and inspiring!!!: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I agree!!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Romantic indeed....may I offer one suggestion. Try posting not in caps. After a year and a half online, I get so used to caps being used when someone wants to shout...when I get to a poem all done in caps...I really have a hard time reading it. Let your words shout for themselves, no need to shout them out ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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TulipGirl48 Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 11glendale, ca, usa |
Wonderful indeed ! |
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