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LOST IN LOVE
New Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 3
COLUMBIA PA USA

0 posted 1999-09-20 07:23 PM


FROM THE FIRST DAY I SAW YOU I ALREADY KNEW
THAT LITTLE BOY SMILE WOULD SOON BE
SAYING:"I LOVE YOU"
YOU HAVE CAPUTURED MY HEART AND NOW IM YOURS
I LOVE YOU SWEETHEART
HAVE NO DOUBTS

THRU THE GOOD TIMES AND THE BAD,SMILES
AND TEARS
I'LL ALWAYS STAY BY YOUR SIDE AS LONG AS YOU
PROMISE TO RID ALL MY FEARS
I KNOW THAT TIME IS MOVIN SLOWLY DAY BY DAY
HAVE NO DOUBTS MY LOVE
IS ALL I CAN SAY

THE DAY IS ALMOST HERE,AND I CAN HADRLY WAIT
NO MORE TEARS,FAREWELL TO ALL THE CRYS
SO LONG TO HEARTACHES AND GOOD-BYES

HAPPY DAYS ARE HERE TO STAY
NOW YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I WAS TALKIN ABOUT
I ALWAYS HAVE TOLD YOU THAT
"I LOVED YOU"AND TO
HAVE NO DOUBTS!


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© Copyright 1999 LOST IN LOVE - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-09-20 07:39 PM


Beautiful and inspiring!!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-21 07:00 PM


I agree!!!



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-21 07:37 PM


Romantic indeed....may I offer one suggestion. Try posting not in caps. After a year and a half online, I get so used to caps being used when someone wants to shout...when I get to a poem all done in caps...I really have a hard time reading it. Let your words shout for themselves, no need to shout them out

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

TulipGirl48
Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 11
glendale, ca, usa
4 posted 1999-09-21 09:00 PM


Wonderful indeed !
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