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Open Poetry #2

Blood Passion

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-19 10:03 PM

OK guys, I posted this in the dark forum but it isn't getting read much (thanks goddess and Jenny Lee) so I brought it here...it is a haiku sequence....

Blood Passion

waves whisper secrets
silent white-capped passion plays
you and I the stars

here in this haven
with grey gulls circling
I taste your lifeblood

salty as my dreams
washed by this guardian sea
your blood on my tongue

I savor its essence
know full your tethered passion
desire its freedom

waves move in rhythms
our wild hearts beat in tandem
shall I set you free?

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Paul Allen Lupien
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 114
Ferndale,Mi.USA

1 posted 1999-09-20 02:51 PM

How can anyone not respond to this?

Shakingly,

Paul

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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

2 posted 1999-09-20 05:49 PM

Thanks Paul...I think it is one of my strongest poems..I appreciate your reading :-)

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-09-20 07:26 PM

Beki, I hadn't seen it before and I think it is brilliant. What a strong combination! Well done.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

4 posted 1999-09-20 10:36 PM

Thank you Balladeer.....I appreciate your comments! :-)

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