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Love so strong your heart aches
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Love so strong your heart aches |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
I sit here all alone wondering why you left me, why we couldnt be together,why you hated me, but one day i woke up and i realized you were gone the one thing i ever loved left me alone in the shadows of my home, the fear that you might get hurt with out me there, the fear that you might have no one's shoulder to cry on, the fear that our two souls would never meet again, my love for you so strong that my heart aches when your gone. ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
oh man i screwed up the titled it should be love so strong my heart aches not your ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jim.....another very beautiful piece of work....but again, I would like to suggest a bit of a different format....as always, merely a suggestion: I sit here all alone wondering why you left me, why we couldnt be together, why you hated me. But one day I woke up and I realized you were gone the one thing I ever loved, left me alone in the shadows of my home. I fear that you might get hurt with out me there. I fear that you might have no one's shoulder to cry on. I fear that our two souls will never meet again. My love for you so strong, that my heart aches when your gone. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
i will get use to this after a while im just slow i guess hehehe thanks for the help no really thanks -Jim ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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