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jfkinyon
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 34
Burbank, CA. USA

0 posted 1999-09-19 03:58 PM


Eternal hope lies broken, my Angel
Your heavenly body has exposed itself
To the elements, a dim light invades
We are undone my love and so alone.

Set worlds apart we fall, together
Cursed to touch without true feeling
Withered vessles, dream-stuff wisping
Sweet nectar escapes thy ripened lips.




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J. F. Kinyon

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-09-22 01:43 PM


Quite nice!!

Welcome!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



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