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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Long Division Why are things so hard for me Fog so dense I can hardly see The only light starts to fade My concerns have been outweighed I'm so full of despair Damages I can't repair A verdict that cannot be swayed Consequences I can't evade A hole in my heart oh so deep Must I stay alone and weep I feel I've grown so very weak Has my sadness reached its peak Will I live to tell my story Will I rise to shine in glory Or has my fate been predecided Heart and soul seem divided How can I face tomorrow Filled with such pain and sorrow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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I think this is an excellent expression of feelings that all of us have from time to time. I like the form of the poem also! And good choice of words!  ------------------ Denise |
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