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Commonalities |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Commonalities The enigma of words still haunts me. The puzzle of subjective meanings. What rings sharp for one, dulls another. Satisfying both is most difficult. Commonalities are hard to come by. The word that stirs and rings ones emotions And pulls the plugs of doubt and question Questions our reach of greater or lesser? Just choosing the wise or thoughtful choice. Wise and thoughtful are hard to come by. I like rhyme it plays like a harp it lulls, It serenades soft sounds on the ear And it lays its sooth on the somber soul. Singing like some mother's lullaby and Good lullabies they are hard to come by. It impresses like few with cleverness. Some bold, some cleaver and some unique. Just to touch the ambrosia of delight And place the cool hand of its amnesty. Delight and amnesty are hard come by. Commonality holds my parity It is something I try to achieve and Could I acquire the sagacity, I could conquer the hard of come by. I could conquer Commonality. |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
I'd like to write a real clever reparte` but "They are hard to come by" Great Seymour! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Seymour, you are quite sagacious! Very good poem!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Perspicacious too......  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and don't forget follicle deficient! Good one, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wolfgang,dsnyder,Nan & Balladeer, I appreciate your read and comments, Thank you one and all. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was very good, a talented man you are. ------------------ Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lost dreamer, Thank you for the read and comment and for the kick up. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Poems like these are definitely hard to come by - I loved it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, I never got to thank you, I do now. |
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