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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas

0 posted 1999-09-19 12:51 PM


Electronically we sat
legs crossed & face to face -
no distractions from the world...
Just serenely quiet space.

Not a word there did we speak
yet we shared a thousand lines -
Your eyes pulling me into you...
Our hearts like rhythmic rhymes.

Your energy flowed through to me
your hand it mirrored mine - -
yet you never even touched me...
in this moment, space & time.

To sit there staring in your eyes
our auras - sweet connection...
Surrounded by our energies -
Of destinied direction.

The energies & light - that
were mingling in the air -
melted two souls into one...
Broken souls needing repair.

Sharing moments of our lives
Two beings - now as one...
You're my star & I your angel -
In our dreams, we play & run.

Come nearer - now my lover
This connection oh so strong -
Our eyes will ever hold this gaze...
Don't question right or wrong.

Sit with me face to face
Two lost souls - becoming one
Blending auras, heat & energies...
In 4 points now, soon one.

~~~ To my Michael, who found me.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
1 posted 1999-09-19 01:22 PM


What a lovely piece, I can remember feeling
this way a couple of times in my life.
Standby for email.

He is a very lucky man indeed, I wish ya many happy returns!!!

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-09-19 01:28 PM


lovely pFF....it is wonderful to watch your love blossom.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-19 01:40 PM


Poet....I can honestly say what that is like. Amazing the energy that can flow through words, these connection beyond this electronic bonds, and the love that knows no time, space or distance. My only hope is the meeting that never was comes to be for you two and that those same feelings carry over only to become stronger. Love is a wonderful thing to see, thanks for letting us all share in yours and Michaels.
Hugs
Ruth

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-19 01:42 PM


pFF,
If you love as well as you write, Michael is in for one hell of a time. One terrific poem.

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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5 posted 1999-09-19 04:02 PM


Thank you each and every one of you.....

Richard33 - I will be e-mailing you back....thank you for all your words of understanding...that truly shows what a true friend you are.

Pepper - thank you - your words are so sweet...

HootOwl - your words of encouragement are so welcome....I know he is admired by most, and I do know how lucky I am.....thank you so much.

Seymour - last but certainly not least....you sir are too kind...I do love as I write...very passionately! I appreciate comments from one as great as you !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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California
6 posted 1999-09-19 08:31 PM


Femme,
I feel your energies all around me, you most assuredly have melted into part of me. I thank you for such a lovely poem ~ it was, indeed, you who found me and given unto me what no other's ever could.

Michael

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
7 posted 1999-09-19 10:33 PM


Wow, PFF, truly beautiful work...I enjoyed this a lot..

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

8 posted 1999-09-19 10:53 PM


Wow. I'm so happy for you, dear. This is just so great!!!!!
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
9 posted 1999-09-19 10:56 PM


Beautiful poem, beautiful connection.....best to you both :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
10 posted 1999-09-19 10:57 PM


What a beautiful blending....I love this.

now about that book!



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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

11 posted 1999-09-20 12:30 PM


I'm glad to be shown once again the power of love, my dear. Thank you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
12 posted 1999-09-20 12:43 PM


Electronically we sat........
thats what I call an eye catching first line......
Great poem

"I'm drunk
and right now I'm so in love with you
and I dont wanna think too much about what we should or shouldn't do
Lay my hands on heaven and the sun and the moon and the stars
While the devil wants to f**k me in the back of his car
Nothing quite like the feel of something new...
....Myabe I'm all messed up in you...."
-Trent Reznor-

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
13 posted 1999-09-20 01:20 PM


That would be NIN, yes? I love them when I'm in a "dirty" mood !! THanks for giving me a moment in their music, Systematic.....loved it !! I think I'll pop them in the CD player right now !!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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