Open Poetry #2 |
What is love? |
Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
What is love something you can just pick up and throw away... Is love something you can just end with out sheding a tear... Is love fear that you might never commit... or is love something that happens between two people when they really care about each other and want to protect each other no matter what the cost... is love something like that... or is love just something you say to make some one else feel special... no love is something that takes time to earn it takes trust, courage, soul, strenth, and of course 2 people who never want to see the other one hurt thats love.... ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very true! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I would have to agree ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
im glad you agree with me about it ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I agree, but in truth I think it's more. It's a force of it's own. |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
yea that woulda been a great add on i gotta think these through more before posting well poetry isnt that hard im use to it seeing as how i ussally write love poems to my girl Diona ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
well the humorous side of me would say: love is counting to 5 before hitting the send button..*g*..ooops HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
Rain bow girl that is funny hahaha i will give you that much -jim ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmn. Ok, I agree! |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
cool im glad you agree -jim ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
this is funny, this is the first poem i ever wrote and its already got 10 replys most of them are mine though lol i guess saying thanks and answearing questions isn't so bad ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
JIm, I think I read somewhere here that you are only 13....if that is true then you are already showing great wisdom. :-) Love is everything you say, and so much more..but you have a great start in understanding here! I think you girl is very lucky! :-) |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
Thanks Beki -Jim Raynor ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
hey has any one noticed that every one in the back pages like pages 9-10-11-12 got some great poems ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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