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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
I beat back the scream its a part of me it eats away at me scabs and bones do come to mind as you kiss the world behind fools do spread an ocean wide its just a running start a place to hide then your done dead from multiple lies ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
How sade, we are all a bunch of depressed souls tonight aren't we? Nice job though...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jackal.....very deep as usual. You prompt your readers to stop just for a minute and think....to play between the words, search for hidden meaning....I like that, challange is a good thing! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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