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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-19 01:30 AM


I beat back the scream
its a part of me
it eats away at me
scabs and bones
do come to mind
as you kiss the world behind
fools do spread
an ocean wide
its just a running start
a place to hide
then your done
dead from multiple lies



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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-09-19 01:36 AM


How sade, we are all a bunch of depressed souls tonight aren't we?
Nice job though...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-19 01:54 PM


Jackal.....very deep as usual. You prompt your readers to stop just for a minute and think....to play between the words, search for hidden meaning....I like that, challange is a good thing!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

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