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BoyToy Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23everett, wa, usa |
Love me like no other Touch me with your sex Feed me your soul Give me your self Embrace me Smother me Caress me Join me Love me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Boy toy....not sure why you didn't get any responses to this one. There are very few word, but the speak a lot. I myself would prefer to see one line changes in it though....instead of Touch me with your sex following the theme of the rest of the poem, I'd like to see Touch me with your heart Now that would be a poem!!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very nice....thanks for sharing ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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BoyToy Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23everett, wa, usa |
to Hoot Owl Poetry, like art, is in the eye of the beholder. Intimacy is a very important part of the love I was writting about, sorry to dissapoint you, >:-) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughs...no doubt and you are quite right, it is all in the eye of the beholder.......but I remain the born romantic. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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