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Summer Dreams |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Laying with you in fields of sweet clover living our summertime dreams I wonder if you still remember such a long time ago it seems I told you tales of knights of old and dragons slain in defeat told of soldiers marching in unison crushing the dead under their feet But the girl that wove such fantasies grew up and moved away but I still remember the stories I told and the boy as he listened each day Now I tell tales in verse and prose to forum friends I’ve come to know wondering, ever wondering where did my summer friend go? Perhaps someday you’ll stumble across a poem of mine and wonder: who is this person by the name of Poet deVine. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Sweet memories deVine. Are you sure you didn't eat any of that candy?  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very nicely written Poet....I think we all have people in our past we just can't help but wonder where they are now |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, Poet deVine. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...A wonderful tale you weave... |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I’ll remember you O’ clever poet De vine you are to me, So gifted are you in rhyme Of wit, you neatly pen it... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Well you made a believer out of me. Nice poem. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautifully Told this story of old !! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words... summer's over now..time to move on....  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautifully said, this Summertime dream. Look back on them fondly for they never really die.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Where to, Lady deVine, the winter of your discontent? Not! Excellent verse. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I often wonder similiar thoughts of people who've crossed my life. I hope this one finds his way to you, Devine One. Michael |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very nice PdV! But do we have to move on? We can't we keep summer around a bit longer? Ah, yes in our poetry! Thanks! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully written Poet ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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