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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Let Me A gentle whisper in my ear I turn around and you are not there Oh how I wish that you were Your tender words chasing away all my darkness Filling me with hope A hope that one day I can call you mine A hope that you will one day give me a chance A chance to hold you, kiss you, to love you A chance to show you that not all guys are the same To show you that I can love you if you let me Let me hold you, kiss you, show you And most of all Let me love you ------------------ "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! Welcome to the family! I looked at your website and like what I see! You did a good job with it!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Clap-Clap Beautiful!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A very heartfelt, hopeful, and lovely poem!! Thank You!! Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Thanx for taking the time to read this poem it is one I wrote about 2 years ago when i first started writing poetry. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic and lovely! ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
~Sigh~..:.. Great job my new friend and welcome!..:.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Let me echo the others...this is a very tender and heartfelt poem....nicely said ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice to come across you again here Justin |
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