Open Poetry #2 |
Kindom Of Passions (REVISED) |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kingdom Of Passions Far away in a land where only fingers, and mouses can transport, lies a kingdom of passions. The largest, brightest place one could ever imagine, where etchings on the walls are created by the Royal Kings, Queens, Princes, and Princesses of the kingdom. Let me introduce you to Ron, our gallant leader. He reaches beyond critical obstacles to tend to all the aches, and pains of all that abide within the kingdom of passions. Amongst the acres of land in this large, bright place there march many knights in shinning armor. Their words be their swords as they tear juice from your eyes, or as they gently caress a smile to your face. Some use their swords to shave you to the ground in hilarious laughter. Welcome to the kingdom of passions where minds come together to share their inner most thoughts, dreams, and humor. Where everyone becomes enlightened through the talents of others. ------------------ Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How in the world did we all miss this one? {Bump} |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Unfortunately, it happens. Things move so fast. Thank you for bringing it back. Wonderful poem, dreamer. You have captured the essence very well. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Dreamer: Missed this one before... glad to have come about it this time around. Nicely penned. I draw my sword and bow in salute to your fine effort. Most enjoyable. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto! Well done! ------------------ Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thanks to all of you, glad you liked it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I can't believe we missed this either! I'm glad it came around again. You have captured it well! I enjoyed this! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very nicely written...I second your sentiments on this one. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
add me to all above...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This kingdom just keeps getting better and better all the time - Let's put a big ole moat around it....... Nice one, LD |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Nice sentiments here, with which I completely agree Now Nan...don't go puttin' up that moat! My canoe has a hole in it right now and my paddle is broken and here I am tryin' to swim and some fool threw a giant peppermint lifesaver at me...hmmph. I had to swim away 'fore the dang thing melted and attracted sharks. I caught hold of the drawbridge at #1 just before it slammed shut, though! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I now will bow to all of our Passions family here, in honor of all the talent, and kindness that exists in this kingdom. I am thankful to have found this home where I can be inspired by the abilities of others. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dreamer this was a wonderful poem - except.... I've read and reread it several times and I STILL haven't found my name. Was this a mistake??? < innocent eyes > |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LJA: There are some relatives that even the best of families try not to mention! LOL |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
LngJhnAg: You did not recognize yourself as one of the knights in shining armor that uses his sword to shave us to the ground in hilarious laughter. You were one of the many that I was pertaining to with that paragraph. Thanks for reading I appreciate. suthern:LngJhn's an important part if this family, as are you and everyone else. Thanks for reading, and replying. I apoligize to both of you for not thanking you sooner. somehow it just slipped by me. |
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