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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 1999-09-01 04:10 PM

I love rainy days, watching the drops gather slowly into a flood,
Like my tears when we're apart.

Droplets of love that spill from my lips to your ears,
Like the blood drips from my broken heart.

As each droplet of blood adds to my veins, as each
Raindrop adds to the storm,
I only dream my words will fill you with Love
And cause my cold heart to warm.

Droplets of love and droplets of Time, mark each breath, second,
And hour until you are mine.
Unlike many, I would not presume to own you
Nor pressure you to accept or decline.

But like droplets of perfume
Sweetening the air,
Your presence in my heart,
Lessens despair

I love rainy days,
For they make me
Think of you.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©

Gentle Soul
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1 posted 1999-09-01 04:14 PM

This is beautiful

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Dark Angel
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2 posted 1999-09-01 04:18 PM

Oh, this is so beautiful Dream

Craig
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3 posted 1999-09-01 04:26 PM

A superbly constructed poem, well written as always, congratulations.

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20

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Houston

4 posted 1999-09-01 04:27 PM

This was beautiful.. wistful.. great poem.

Nicole
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Florida

5 posted 1999-09-01 04:30 PM

I like the format of this one. The words have such a sweet, wistful feeling to them. Very lovely.

Sunshine

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6 posted 1999-09-01 05:04 PM

"Droplets of time" somehow seems to be so opulent. Well done, Sir.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-09-01 05:52 PM

DreamEvil,
No matter the topic your words are powerful
and always seem to stir my emotions.
Well done.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 1999-09-01 08:32 PM

I love rainy days also.....sometimes it seems as though the rain washes away all the impurities from our lives if even just for that moment

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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9 posted 1999-09-01 08:46 PM

There is so much emotion in this it amazes me! This is just BEAUTIFUL!!!! It is sad, yet wonderful, gentle and passionate! You have really stirred my emotions and touched me! Most Excellent work Dream!

caroline
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10 posted 1999-09-01 08:46 PM

I love everything about this poem!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Poet deVine

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11 posted 1999-09-01 09:35 PM

Perfect. (there's nothing more to say!)

Alwye

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In the space between moments

12 posted 1999-09-01 09:39 PM

Powerful, Beautiful, Perfect...wow, Dream. I must say, this could very well be one of the best things I've ever read..

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Nan

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13 posted 1999-09-01 11:09 PM

Nicely done, DE....

Lost Dreamer
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14 posted 1999-09-03 09:48 PM

I am bumping this back up to the top for anyone else who may have missed it like me the first time around. Great job!

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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15 posted 1999-09-04 02:09 AM

Thank you all for the response to this piece.

Mike Pickering
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16 posted 1999-09-04 02:11 AM

All I can say is bravo

Kelly
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17 posted 1999-09-04 01:56 PM

This is so beautiful......Thanks

~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA

18 posted 1999-09-04 05:03 PM

Dream, this is so beautiful! I can't believe I've missed it up until now! I'm in love this poem! Would you mind if I printed it and hung it on my wall?

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