Passions in Prose |
Annie and Jess |
Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
The moon was abundant shining silver. The light emphasizing silhouettes observed by young eyes watching from the windows. Staggering across freshly plowed soil, stumbling, he sliced a groove in the earth as he fell. Close behind, she ran to his side. Struggling with an awkward grace balancing dead weight on to sturdy shoulders, she pulled him to his feet. “Come on Jess,” she said, her words flat, void of emotion, as she spoke “ let’s go in the house, now.” slumping forward in a grotesque moan, he leaned into her body , using it as a staff to steady his gait. She was weary. A fact recognized , but not voiced. To question or complain, wasn’t her nature. It was a time period of expected pregnancies, babies, and little formal education. She accepted. Just as she accepted the scarce rains, the sand storms, the endless chores, his spendthrift ways, the abuse, and the alcohol. Once in the house, with cool callused hands she undressed him and laid him gently upon the bed they shared. Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Interesting story you have here. It seems to leave the reader to decide what has happened. Keep writing. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Dawn Eclipse: Thank you for reading, I probably needed to expand a bit, I may re-do it. *S* Z |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I think you've explored this theme before - the way, despite his faults - she cares for him - The way you did it this time - with such brevity - I think - is excellent |
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