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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well, this is my first time posting a prose or even lookin at the site, i usually only mess with poetry but i guess i want to try some prose too, so here goes.. Us. Together. Your long sweet brown hair intermingled with our bodies. Your body on top of mine. We share our souls through our mouths in a breath-taking kiss. It goes on. We lay there, my arms, one on your lower back, one on your shoulder blades, pull you closer to me. Yours do the same. We lay there in pure bliss, in a dream we hope will never end. Then we stop. We lie together and talk, occasionally kissing, about our fears. We lay on your bed, my arm around your waist, me on my side, and you on your back, your hand brushing my face. I could have gone to sleep there and never woken up, live the rest of the life in the dream I seemed to be in. I closed my eyes, to hold the tears. I love you so much. When I open them, I expect to wake up, yet there you lay, your glass eyes looking at me with nothing but love. We loath tomorrow, then we must part. We pity yesterday, we didn’t have each other then. Now is forever. If a picture is a thousand words, than this feeling is a thousand pictures, and words cannot describe it. Then I must leave; you come as far as you can. On the way to tomorrow, the dream fades to reality, and we sit silent in the car. We cry for our problems, for the obstacles that we foresee. We will overcome them all, I know. As I get out of the car, we hug and kiss goodbye. Until next time, and then I leave. When we first began the subject, I thought it was about me leaving you behind. But so much has changed in one day, in fifteen minutes, that I have realized the true subject. It’s not if we will fall apart or stay together, fore we will always be together at heart. No, it is about how many obstacles we will make our hearts overcome to be together in the end. let the fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same imply ~EvE 6 |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, no one's replied to this yet. Like I said last night, I think it's great. *deep breath* no one will really fully get this....but..oh well I guess. I don't know what else to tell you....I'm not even sure what to think  Keep this up, it's great, ahem....um...Bel PS btw, love you too |
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