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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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0 posted 2000-10-12 09:33 AM




It was a beautiful, sunny day with only a
hint of snow in the forecast.  
Already, several
feet had graced the landscape bringing
children soaring on sleds, and cardinals began searching for food.   Elderly people had taken the opportunity to find a park bench,
catching a breath of cool, winter air and
basking in the purity of the
scene.

In one section of the park, there stood an empty
swing set, for children had seemed to have
forgotten how to swing.   Only the wind moving one
seat only slightly, begging for a person with
spirit, sensitivity and a lust for adventure and something to slide into it and reach for the heavens.

David needed to get away from the office.
Stacks of Wall Street Journals were plaguing him
in disarray, he simply couldn't think straight.
This morning he arrived at the office and by
noon could not find his desk.   He wished that  everything had glowed in the dark.   It didn't!!!

"I'll take some time to smell the roses" he
thought.   "Oh, hell, there aren't any roses, it's
December 20th, oh well, I'll go to the park, feed
the pigeons, maybe reminiscence a bit about my own
childhood days playing in the snow.    Who knows, it will do me good"

Lunchtime came and he ordered something to go
and hot coffee. With only a spark of Christmas
spirit left, he felt drained, tired, oh it was
all so much. The presents had to be wrapped, the time was drawing close.   Doesn't anyone take the time?  Does anyone simply enjoy being alive?

Entering the park, he noticed the familiar empty benches and scattered people going here and there and the snow being heavier in some places
than others.  
He wondered "where were the snowmen?
  
Don't children build them anymore?   Isn't there someone with a little "play" inside, someone who  would break free of the mold and he certainly felt moldy at times!"

A beggar approached him unexpectedly "Say, buddy,
got any spare hundred dollar bills, it's been a
long time since I drank, I mean ate"

David searched the snow for coins to  only reply   "no, I'm sorry, but here's a Wall Street Journal, they're hiring after the first of the year....good luck and ho ho ho"

Another gray haired lady sat down next to him on
the bench and said "Pardon me, do you know where
I am?"

Oh, dear it was shaping up to be a lost lunch,
one only dreamed of.  Nothing here...."Nothing
here for me" he thought.
But wait, stop, look and listen.

To his amazement, what he thought was the red
glow of a cardinal was only the sunlight
bouncing off of a red haired figure in the distance.

Standing up, releasing his arm from the frantic
woman who was pleading with him to inform her
if it was an election year,  he approached a lovely
creature who seemed to be lost in a world of her
own.

She was red haired, about 5'3", and she was
wearing a long, black wool coat. She was wearing mittens,  many didn't wear mittens these
days, and he sort of liked that although he
couldn't remember why.

She wore a long scarf, tied around her neck,
From only the back he knew she would be exquisite
  

Yet, here she was sitting on a swing, not a
bench.   Would she too be daffy, not knowing which
end was up?  Would he even be interested in her end?  
Would she prove to be a homeless person
or someone who was hopelessly wandering from
city to city looking for someone to take advantage of?

No, certainly not!   Not this highly sensitive,
waifish form of a woman.
Why, she was ....she was.....magical.

Before he could make his presence known, she
began swinging, only slightly at first, then more
forcibly, higher and higher, but only holding on
with one hand. This woman really knew what she was doing and having a wonderful time doing it.    You see, in her other arm she held a....it seemed to be a bride doll....a beautiful bride
doll.m  Yes, it certainly was.

"Ok, David,  you had better get the hell out
of here, I don't care how beautiful she
is.....you're not ready for this one!"

She was humming, and not really bothering
anyone, why was he thinking of turning back?   No,
he couldn't;he wanted to know why she was so
happy, as a matter of fact, he wished he could
feel as happy as she appreared to be.

Her eyes were closed, and a wishful look rested on her face as  he walked around to see this woman...this swinging wonder and realized she was not a member of Bailey's Circus, no no, she was an ordinary, no no, she couldn't be ordinary, she was....she was happy!

"Pardon me, but you seem to be enjoying yourself"
He blurted out.

"Oh!  I'm sorry,  I didn't know anyone was watching
me" she replied.

"No, no, don't stop, continue with your...uh your
swinging, please, don't let me intimidate you. In
fact could I join you?"

Smiling she spoke confidently "Yes, please do,
others have ran away in fear"   David was not surprised.

She was swinging higher and he soon joined in not
caring how it looked.

"That is a beautiful doll you have there., does
she has a name?"

"Of course, and thank you.   Her name is
Rose...why, she's as much a part of me as
the snow, the sun, the swing, can you understand
how it feels to hold onto something so wonderful
and carry it with you always?

"Why, yes, yes I certainly do."  David was
intrigued at this point and didn't want to leave
now, but wanting to hold back;not wishing to
frighten her said "You are very pretty, are you
here alone?"

"Not anymore, and thank you" she replied.

Winded and laughing, they drew still in the
swings and she introduced herself as "My name is
Rose and I always wanted to reach the stars,
you know, and they seem so out of reach.....do
you ever wonder why they paper the sky with
beauty, almost teasing us with their brilliance.?"

"You have a wonderful way with words, Rose"
David  wanted to play some more!!!

Her face was pure, her cheeks reddened from the
cold and her eyes brown and moist with an
anticipation he had not seen in a long, long
time.

This woman was turning him on!!!!

Carefully setting her doll down in a very safe
part of the bench nearby, she, without thinking
drew a huge handful of snow into her mittens and
formed the most amazing snowball you had ever
seen!

Before he could turn to see what she was doing, a
cold, wet object speedily came approaching and
made it's debut right between his eyes!!

Pow!  A perfect hit!

"Hey! I didn't even see that coming"
He spoke knowing he was going to respond in kind.

"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to take you off
guard" she was laughing now., yet carefully
keeping a safe eye on her doll.

"My ass, you knew I wasn't looking!!!"

With two hands, for men are so necessary for
having two hands    
he formed the most formidable snowball
which soon found it's way as a comet soaring
onto her.....her.......chest!!!!
Bingo........cold cleavage which only made her
wince!!!

"Oh, I'm sorry, Rose, I only just met you and
already I'm making improper advances towards you"

"My ass!  You knew where you were aiming!!!

"Yes, I have one for your ass also, and by the
way, aren't we getting familiar?"

"Rose,  close your ears, you haven't been
on your honeymoon yet, you shouldn't hear this
kind of language, actually  bride dolls are
quite frustrated, they never quite reach the honeymoon
stage now do they?"  she spoke guarding her doll.

Several hundred snowballs later, and much
laughter into the afternoon, David realized he
must return to work....

"Rose, please will you meet me here tomorrow?
we will have so much fun and maybe,
just maybe you could come "alone"?

"Are you challenging me?" she retorted.

"Well, yes, as a matter of fact I am!"

Drying somewhat her coat, and brushing off the
first direct hit, he offered "Please let me help
you there".....

"No, no, that's fine, I'll be fine,
I'm wearing a wonder bra, I mean it's waterproof,
oh never mind..."

"I hope you enjoyed yourself?"

"Yes, but your height was a disadvantage for me,
you know, I'm really going to bring my stilts
tomorrow"

Wanting to warm her in another way, he quickly
erased those thoughts, and yet.....what would
tomorrow bring, there were only a few days until
Christmas.....
would Santa be kind and give him another
opportunity to play?

"Then, tomorrow, you'll be here?  You promise?" he suddenly felt nine years old again.

"Yes, I will return, for you see I have only
begun to realize how short life is, but I know
that no matter what, I'll never be alone, for
my doll, Rose, will always be with me"

Watching her walk away, he wanted to go after
her, find out where she lived, a phone number
anything, but somehow, somehow he knew she would
be there, just as she promised.

If only for this time, they would play together
and the world would seem insignificant yet
meaningful.

The park grew cold, the swings came to a halt from lack of laughter and breeze and  the benches were now empty and he began his way back
to his office.

"God, what a woman!!" he thought, and realized he
felt very, very warm, very warm.........and that he had indeed stopped to enjoy the beauty of the roses in winter."

The End

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Kathleen





[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-12-2000).]

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-10-12 01:56 PM


Kathleen - a warm (ironically, LOL) and touching story. I enjoyed it... seriously... but please don't center your text for Prose!!!

LOL

Chris

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-12 02:10 PM


Thanks Chris please bear with me, I seem to be having a hard time with the format on this one!

Kathleen


Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-10-12 02:27 PM


it's no use, I can't get the format right, I'll have to retype it and try to fix it that way, I'm sorry!!

Kathleen


Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-10-12 02:27 PM


it's no use, I can't get the format right, I'll have to retype it and try to fix it that way, I'm sorry!!

Kathleen


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