Passions in Prose |
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The Fated Dance---final song |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
His mouth drops open in disbelief. He gazes at this vision, this water sprite, covered in glistening droplets, as she splashes and laughs at him. To say she is a dream come true doesnt even come close to how he feels at this moment. To think that by leaving one moment sooner he would have missed this dance. He holds his hand out to her, all the love he feels shining in those warm brown eyes. All the laughter leaves her at his look. She takes his hand, and he pulls her into his arms. "Forever," he whispers."Forever in just one dance." DO YOU BELIEVE? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
truly lovely Paula - i really wondered howyou'd end this - - let's see a second ending in our preferred forum ~WG~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a wonderful piece. thanks for the read "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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