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Passions in Prose

Clone me please

Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28

Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

0 posted 2000-01-28 10:53 PM

She mirrors every living inch. From the pulsating heart that beats crazily out of control when she is feeling flustered to her crazed brown eyes when she moans in pain or sadness. Tilting her head when she laughs hysterically out loud. The silence when she can not think of anything useful to say.
Her persistence to get the things she desires most. The manipulation of fragile emotions played like a good game of chess. Cautious signs are all around and she will still jump.
What scares me most?
I named her Daryn.

Dusk Treader

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Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

1 posted 2000-01-28 11:42 PM

Interesting piece... I'm guessing this is about your daughter? Nice piece, enjoyed

In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons

Nagemx
Junior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 14

2 posted 2000-01-29 10:53 AM

You, dearest, have a very attractive writing style (in my opinion, anyway). It makes me feel powerful, intense bursts of imagery. Keep posting! I love it!

Never regret

patchoulipumpkin
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 196
Bermuda

3 posted 2000-01-29 11:46 AM

I dig this, very cool..

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2000-02-01 10:19 PM

Cool! Welcome to Passions In Prose!!!
Love the name Daryn, and love the spelling you use!

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