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Sin ~Part 1~
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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The hot water washed over her, washing away her sin and the tears that fell from her eyes. He had been just another man, among the many that she had used to ease the ache. Soon she would forget his name, like the many others who had come before him. Explanations? There were none, she had known what she was doing. Knew that someday she would be held accountable for her actions. Actions that were determined by personal demons she could not exorcise. But today was not someday, not yet anyway. It had been this way forever. Well, forever was perhaps an exaggeration, 13 or 14 years would be a better measure of time. She had spent her life searching for a love that made her feel complete. She had given up hope. So many years of waiting had caused her to doubt such a love existed. Even if she found it she didn’t think it would change anything at this point. It was too late. She was already a whore. It hadn’t always been this way. Once she had been a good girl, doing what every other teenage girl did. Phone, friends, school. She had been a sheltered child. The youngest of two, born to a woman who had spent her own life searching for something. Finally finding it but dying before she could truly enjoy it. Leaving behind a young girl of 16, so lost and alone. |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Sin? Nice writing |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hello Luce! Good start, but be careful! I know you...LOL |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
haha Chris.. I would never try to turn this into the Adult Forum..  |
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