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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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This was written in the heat of the moment..I've always had a connection with the myth of the unicorn. I identify with them and have always been intrigued by their beauty and solitude. I am like the unicorn. Noble, brave, yet isolated. A beauty unreachable, a soul untouchable. Power emminates, yet that power is fragile, weakened by the grasp of hatred. My pureness blackened by the burden of living, of hiding who I am. I have compassion, an ability to love like few can. And yet I am pushed away, unaccepted, forced to dwell only with the few who accept me for what I am. I am a fighter. I will not give up, no matter how clouded and ominous the horizon, no matter how scarlet stained my path may become. The rain of stone may arrive and darken my silver coat ruby, but I shall continue to tread my road of destiny. I am loyal. Once you have broken the iron walls surrounding my heart, you have gained something you shall have forever. And that is my love. I shall carry you in your weakest hour, I shall be your rock and be your hope. You may share in my riches even when it seems there is nothing to share. Like the unicorn, my love is everlasting. I am still painfully alone. The clouds, the brilliant moon, the very light of the stars may guide me, but in my heart I am solitary. With a bittersweet feeling I watch life, finally realizing that I shall never fit in. My kind is rare, but we do exist upon the vast emerald lands. I know this, for I am the unicorn. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Never alone, when blessed with beauty such as yours. You shine through in this Alwye and I feel blessed to have peeked into the mind of the legendary creature! Beautifuly done! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
If you could hear me, I'd give you a round of applause! (maybe I'll do it anyway) Wonderful! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This was spellbinding -- thank you for this glimpse into your soul. "I shall carry you in your weakest hour, I shall be your rock and be your hope. You may share in my riches even when it seems there is nothing to share." Perfect! --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful writing, Krista. You always amaze me with your beauty and descriptive verse and imagery. Excellent  My friend, this describes you well, but you don't always have to be alone, there are those of us who love you and cherish you. My deepest thanks for being the rock, carrying me when I'm weak, and being my hope. In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much! I do know that I'm not always alone, and I cherish all of you for being here. I do know that a part of me will always be a loner though. Thank you so much for your kindness.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
I think this is tremendous. I read it and it reminded me somewhat of myself in a way, though i've never considered myself as a unicorn. Its interesting, i've never come across such a parallel with an animal before. Very original, thanks. |
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Felix Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 78USA |
sniff....sniff...can somebody hand me a tissue please. I grew up with every horse and unicorn book that ever existed... You described them perfectly...and me as well. I love your poem!! Did you ever read about a frog who dreamed of being a king, and then became one? - Neil Diamond |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I too have long loved the unicorn. Thank you very much for your kindness. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Sharleen Junior Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 16 |
WOW! That was something else. I can understand this one well. Great Job, Keep it up. I'm looking forward to reading somemore of your work. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written and rich with language and flow, almost like a poem. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Wonderfully written. The way in which you speak of this mystical creature brings it to life in my imagination. I do notice a small similarity between the lines that say you carry people in their weakest hour and the fact thatGod does the same. Wonderful writing, none the less. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Krista, Simply a beautiful piece. I enjoyed this very much Jenny Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
oh my god. that was SO beautiful. I hope you don't mind that I printed out a copy for myself... I have to show it to some friends... they will love it too! Thank you so much. -wen |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much. Wendy- I'm honored that you liked it that much. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Krista, I have always thought the Unicorn to be a truly beautiful, albeit fictional animal - but you have indeed brought it to life with this piece. You have a marvelous talent and it is so like you to share the unfolding of it with us all. Thank you. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Alwye: Never before have I read a tale about a unicorn as beautiful as this. A solid piece of art. And, I mean art, artists can bring paintings to life, you have brought the unicorn to life with your words. Imaginative, unique, descriptive, flawless, brilliant, perfect! I really look forward to more writing of yours. Applause for Alwye, as I stand back in awe. I printed out a copy for myself too! I love this piece! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sunshine-wow, I'm very very thankful for your kindness. To have someone like you think so much of something I wrote is quite an honor.Melissa- Wow, I don't believe I've ever received a comment like that from anyone on anything. (blushing) Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I am stunned by your wonderful comments. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Krista.....WOW ! This is an amazing, beautiful story. Not only does it describe the unicorn wonderfully and gives me a peek into your soul, it tells the story about me. One I could never (and will never) find the words for ! If you don't mind, I'll keep a copy of this in my special archives. Thanks girl. This is absolutely wonderful ! |
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Bossmans_angel New Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 2Ohio |
Very beautiful. I haven't read something so wonderful in a long time [This message has been edited by Bossmans_angel (edited 01-27-2000).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, thank you all so much. I never thought this would get so much response. But it is from my soul and I thank you for taking the time to glimpse into the depths of it. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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