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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I would rather you come at me with one thousand knives; throw your fists in to my face. I would rather you unleash your beastly rage upon my body, than to sever my soul with your injurious words. I am but a rotten peach, molding, sour and distasteful in your eyes. A failure to your senses of satisfaction, I was never what you wanted, n’er shall I be. Icy words that trip like strong daggers from your lips are your forté, what you live for, I avow. Sonambulistic, subhuman, nothingness... I capriciously depress to my knees. The suffering you alone have given reason, is to no avail, my greatest loathing. Your detrimental words lacerate the tiny, congruent threads of the tapestries within my heart. Your bitter coldness tears at my aching lungs, and I find it arduous to even breathe. And the time may come that, perhaps, I might escape the tribulation you bestow upon me.... Eventually... Though, you may find yourself nonexistent, in time, these bitter wounds will fill with salt with every haunting memory of your mistreatment. And I shall cry out with the tortured souls from Hell, yearning to escape the pain, longing for even death; yet, knowing my anguish is an element of my whole, it is a commodity which is embraced and nurtured at the hand of my own sweet, innocent child inside. ©1999 ~onevoice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The picture painted with this one is quite vivid and descriptive. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Nothing hurts as badly as words,nothing can take away there sting,wounds heal,but the words always remain.Very vivid. ------------------ "There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart" |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
So very true leelew... Thank you for your reply. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Your talent is amazing and inspiring! "yet, knowing my anguish is an element of my whole"...I love that! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much Satiate. I appreciate your praise!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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