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merlynh
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

0 posted 1999-11-03 11:31 PM

"Come on honey... Give me a big one!" he said, "Make it right on the lips!"

"I'm not kissing you..!" she said. "Not in this lifetime."

"Pucker--up!" He said while looking up. "Please…," making a sad face.

She threw down the frog, running away. "Oh nasty! How discussing!"

"Honey! Honey, wake up," shaking his wife. "I was only trying to give you a kiss while you were sleeping. "You didn't have to hit me..."

"Oh I'm sorry dear." being concerned. "I didn't mean to. I didn't hurt you! Did I?"

"No--that's okay baby, I understand." rubbing the side of his cheek. "I'm alright. Really I am."

"Let me kiss it and it'll feel better," making a pouting gesture with her mouth.

"Well--okay." He said, as she leaned over and give him a big kiss on the cheek.

"Now isn't that better?" She said smiling, watching him press his lips together and looking up, while a long tongue came from his mouth snatching a fly in mid air. "I knew that wasn't a dream!" she screamed, furious.

"Clam down dear." patting her on the shoulder. "Go back to sleep..." pushing her to lay down again. " Dream... Next time you can eat the fly."

© 1999 Merlyn Hearn

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 1999-11-04 10:36 PM

Oh, your just a scream, you are Merlyn. Well at least there's not a '0' next to this piece now. I look for the zeros and post replies. I know what it feel like.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-04 11:00 PM

ohh merlyn...*sigh*...I haven't had the time to read and reply here today. This is an interesting read. Your mind goes places mine can not seem to enter my friend. Bravo!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-05 08:39 AM

M..I love your work

As sometimes it reminds of Hobbits w/attitudes

You have a gift of creating echanting little characters.

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

roxane
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 505
us

4 posted 1999-11-05 06:45 PM

i have one word: hilarious. i thought of my boyfriend saying something like that to me, but he is not however a frog.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-06 03:36 AM

This is great! Loved it!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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